The Ring
I wait in the meeting room. I sigh. This is hopeless, I think
to myself. I look at the thin briefcase beside me. I see a tiny golden yellow lock
on it. I press the button residing on it, and it opens with a soft click. I stare into it, it’s empty. I
look through it, but to no avail. It’s empty. Then I see it. A small, shiny
ring. It looks as if something is emanating from it, something dark, like… like
shadows emerging then retracting to and from the ring. I slip it onto my finger. I suddenly go cold.
Fab! The suspense that your piece has created is great. Very well written.
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