The Prof. 2 Part 1
The thing
about scientists, they’re either good or bad. In this case… BAD
I trust you have read some of my previous
works of THE. PROF., This is a continuation of those 3 stories.
-Author
I suddenly
open my eyes. I gasp. Where am I? I
ponder in my head. Well, one thing I DO
know; It’s nowhere good… I look around. Suddenly, a TV screen above my head
flashes from its black state, to a bright white, before finally fading into
colour. An old, white-haired man in a lab coat appears on the screen. “Hello,
my guinea pig,” He says in a loud, screechy voice. “I shan’t take too long, but
I will say this; ENJOY!” And with a
screechy cackle that probably shook the floor a little, due to the modulator
making his voice louder, so that I can hear it from across the room, probably
even Jupiter. And so, I walk. I find
a man on the ground. Is he… dead? I
ponder, but he jolts up. And he gives me a huge
fright… “Hello? I guess…” he says. “I guess you found my other guinea pig. Get along, you’ll be
spending an awfully long time
together!” And he is gone. But now I hear a roar. I look behind me. A tiger. I
screech, then run. The man sees, and he starts to run, too. We see a door. But
right before we get there, the tiger is blocking our escape… “Oh no…” I murmur.
“We’re doomed…”
Jason,
ReplyDeleteWords like PONDER, MURMUR, and DOOMED help build the tone in your piece. Great work. Please be mindful of the parameters of the challenge--that is: keep your submission to the 100 word count. I'd like to submit you for SHOWCASE, but I feel the word count must be considered.
Keep Writing!
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA